Набираю команду 2, редизайн Legendary Evils Set 31-40 Опции

[Skay]

Итак, кто желает можем приложить руку к редизайну Legendary Evils Set с 31-40 номера, вот первый красавец.

#31 Remorhaz (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 137
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 20
Level: 13
Speed: 6
HP: 250
Melee: +22/+20 (40 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Huge Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 3
Swallow Whole: (Destroy Medium or smaller creature; DC 20)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
[] []Immolating Carapace: Replaces attack action: Each adjacent enemy takes 20 fire damage and 20 cold damage, DC 23 ).

A thousand legs of cold- and fire-fueled fury.

[Darksider]

А с какой это стати он CG?
Может сделать хотя бы CE/CG?

А Swallow Whole пойдёт как способность, заменяющая атаку, или способность, дополняющая атаку? И не слишком ли жирно 40 магического урона для существа за 137 очков? Посмотреть хотя бы на Purple Worm'a, тот стоит 189, но при этом имеет 25 обычного урона от основной атаки. Да и 13-ый уровень тоже весьма жирноват для такой стоимости - у аспекта Тиамат (что стоит 352) 13-ый уровень.

[Tien]

Может сделать хотя бы CE/CG?

А Swallow Whole пойдёт как способность, заменяющая атаку, или способность, дополняющая атаку? И не слишком ли жирно 40 магического урона для существа за 137 очков?

Поддерживаю.

И вот несколько моих рестатов для примера.

#37 Storm Titan (Epic)
Size: Huge
Pts: 172
Alignment: CG
AC: 25
Level: 19
Speed: 8
HP: 155
Melee: +22/+17 (10 + 15 Electricity)
Type: Huge Giant
Special Abilities:
Resist 25 Electricity
Melee Reach 3
Save =10
Flight
Spells:
3rd Level 
lightning bolt [][][] (line 12; 20 electricity damage, DC 15)
5th Level
empowered lightning bolt [][] (line 12; 30 electricity damage; DC 17)

#32 Rimefire Griffon
Size: Large
Pts: 63
Alignment: CG
AC: 22
Level: 10
Speed: 8
HP: 65
Melee: +16/+10 (5 + 5 Fire + 5 Cold)
Type: Large Magical Beast
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Flight 
Pounce  (This creature can use all its melee attacks when charging.)
Breath Weapon [][] (Replaces attacks: cone; 15 Cold or Fire damage; DC 15)
Resist 10 Cold,Fire

[Skay]

#32 Rimefire Griffon
Size: Large
Pts: 63
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 19
Level: 9
Speed: F8
HP: 90
Melee: +15/+13 (10 magic+ 10 cold damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Pounce (This creature can use all its melee attacks when charging.)
Bloodlust
[] [] Rimefire Blast: (Replaces attacks: cone; 5 fire damage OR 15 cold damage; DC 22)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
Flyby: Replaces attack : Move up to its speed (minimum 1 square) and make 1 melee attack or Rimefire Blast attack at any time during that move.

#33 Salamander Firetail
Size: Large
Pts: 69
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 23
Level: 12
Speed: 6
HP: 115
Melee: +19/+14 (15 + 10 fire damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Fire
Cleave
Double Damage from Cold
DR 5
[] Quadro Attack: Make 4 basic attacks.
[] [] Whipping Tail: (Replaces attacks: line 12; 25 fire damage; DC 19)

SPELLS
4th Level
swift fireburst (swift; each adjacent creature; 15 fire damage, can cast while adjacent to enemy)

With a lash of its tail, the entire battlefield erupted in flames.

# 34 Scarecrow Stalker
Size: medium
Pts: 17
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 15
Level: 6
Speed: 6
HP: 40
Melee: +9 (10 damage)
Ranged:+11 (10 damage+sleep poison)
Type: Construst, Fey
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Sleep Poison (Sleep; DC 16)
Double Damage from Fire
Stalker: +2 Attack and +5 Damage against targets with no other adjacent enemies or allies.
Restuff: Minor action: This creature heals 5 HP.

Come. It is time to keep your appointment with the straw men.

#35 Sivak Draconian

Size: Large
Pts: 28
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 18
Level: 8
Speed: F8
HP: 55
Melee: +15/+10 (15 magic/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid − Dragon − Reptilian
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Melee Reach 2
Breath Weapon [] [] (Replaces attacks: cone; 10 damage; DC 15, Hit or miss, push each target up to 2 squares after resolving all attacks.)
Breath Weapon [] (Replaces attacks: line 12; 25 electricity damage; DC 15)
Resist 5 Cold
Death Shape: When this creature is destroyed by an enemy, that enemy is Stunned(DC 18).

Born of corrupted silver dragon eggs, the sivak are the largest and most martial of the draconians.

[Skay]

А с какой это стати он CG?
Может сделать хотя бы CE/CG?

А Swallow Whole пойдёт как способность, заменяющая атаку, или способность, дополняющая атаку? И не слишком ли жирно 40 магического урона для существа за 137 очков? Посмотреть хотя бы на Purple Worm'a, тот стоит 189, но при этом имеет 25 обычного урона от основной атаки. Да и 13-ый уровень тоже весьма жирноват для такой стоимости - у аспекта Тиамат (что стоит 352) 13-ый уровень.

Может, но помимо критики хорошо бы приводить и свои варианты )

Желательно закончить уже к понедельнику

[Xou]

ты не пытайся найти себе бесплатную рабочу силу, а открой ММ 3.5, а также статы крич, близких по очкам, и спроектируй рестаты под руководством дизайн-гайда.

как вам моя поддержка? правда, я специалист по полезным советам?

[Darksider]

Главным образом нужно смотреть на существ такой же стоимости в 1.0. Например, у существ стоимостью 63 очка, средние показатели AC равны 21 при средних показателях HP равных 70. В общем открывайте Miniature Assistant и проводите аналогии. А то, делая всё на вскидку, вы создадите уберсуществ и внесёте ужасный дисбаланс.

Я бы помог с превеликим удовольствием, но в данный период реальной жизни у меня катастрофически не хватает времени. И у нас может возникнуть масса споров по поводу переделок карточек существ, так что я считаю переделку карточек 2.0 в 1.0 необязательной и предпочту довольствоваться официальным продуктом, дабы избежать ненужных споров и не обломать кайф от игры.

[Darksider]

И вообще, такие серьёзные вопросы следует решать группой специалистов, собранных за круглым столом, ИМХО.

[Skay]

ты не пытайся найти себе бесплатную рабочу силу, а открой ММ 3.5, а также статы крич, близких по очкам, и спроектируй рестаты под руководством дизайн-гайда.

как вам моя поддержка? правда, я специалист по полезным советам?

Забавно, конечно, ладно бы я просил народ вспахать свой огород, тогда твой упрек был как то оправдан.
А так... по крайней мере выглядит не корректно

[Tien]

Итак, кто желает можем приложить руку к редизайну Legendary Evils Set с 31-40 номера, вот первый красавец.

#31 Remorhaz (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 137
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 20
Level: 13
Speed: 6
HP: 250
Melee: +22/+20 (40 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Huge Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 3
Swallow Whole: (Destroy Medium or smaller creature; DC 20)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
[] []Immolating Carapace: Replaces attack action: Each adjacent enemy takes 20 fire damage and 20 cold damage, DC 23 ).

Я бы предложил вот такой вариант Remorhaz (немного переделанный вариат Ская)
#31 Remorhaz (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 137
Commander:
Alignment: CG/CE
AC: 20
Level: 12
Speed: 6
HP: 165
Melee: +22/+19 (25 magic + Swallow Whole)
Ranged:
Type: Huge Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 3
Swallow Whole: (Destroy Medium or smaller creature; DC 19)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
[] []Immolating Carapace: Replaces attack action: Each adjacent enemy takes 15 fire and 15 cold damage, DC 20 ).

Несколько усреднил показатели для стоимости 137 очков, хотя он все еще очень силен. Обсуждаем.

#32 Rimefire Griffon
Size: Large
Pts: 63
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 19
Level: 9
Speed: F8
HP: 90
Melee: +15/+13 (10 magic+ 10 cold damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Pounce (This creature can use all its melee attacks when charging.)
Bloodlust
[] [] Rimefire Blast: (Replaces attacks: cone; 5 fire damage OR 15 cold damage; DC 22)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
Flyby: Replaces attack : Move up to its speed (minimum 1 square) and make 1 melee attack or Rimefire Blast attack at any time during that move.

Урон от melee и жизни завышены, dc 22 тоже очень высок. Модификатор атаки, наоборот занижен(по сравнению с другими кричами за 63 очка: Griffon Cavalry например) потому мой вариант мне кажется более приближенным к норме, хотя можно к моим статам грифона еще добавить:
Flyby: Replaces attack : Move up to its speed (minimum 1 square) and make 1 melee attack or Breath Weapon at any time during that move.

[Tien]

Вот мой вариант, немного усредненный в соответствии с миниатюрами стоимостью 69 очков по ассистенту.

#33 Salamander Firetail
Size: Large
Pts: 69
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 20
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 115
Melee: +19/+14 (10 + 10 fire damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Fire
Cleave
Double Damage from Cold
DR 5
[] Quadro Attack: Make 4 basic attacks.
[] [] Whipping Tail: (Replaces attacks: line 12; 25 fire damage; DC 18)

SPELLS
4th Level
swift fireburst (swift; each adjacent creature; 15 fire damage, can cast while adjacent to enemy)

Почти все без изменений, только я немного понизил уровень существа и его AC, ну и конечно же урон.

Насчет # 34 Scarecrow Stalker, то почти все мне нравится но:
Restuff: Minor action: This creature heals 5 HP.
Немного не вписывается в правила 1.0 редакции.
Как вариант: Restuff: Replaces move: This creature heals 5 HP.
А еще CG несколько к нему не подходит. Скорее уж он CE.

#35 Sivak Draconian
Я бы уменьшил урон 2го дыхания с 25 до 20 (25 всетаки многовато для такой стоимости)

p.s. Кстати, что насчет моего варианта Шторм Титана? А то что-то никаких отзывов...

[Tien]

Мой вариант:
#36 Slaad Spawn
Size: Medium
Pts: 12
Commander:
Alignment: CE
AC: 17
Level: 5
Speed: 6
HP: 35
Melee: +7/+1 (10/5)
Ranged:
Type: Outsider - Spawn
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Death Burst  (5 damage; DC 16)
Chaotic Slam (Replaces turn: This creature can move up to its Speed as though with Flight, then make attack: +8(stanned until end turn). On miss, this creature is destroyed)

[Xou]

Забавно, конечно, ладно бы я просил народ вспахать свой огород, тогда твой упрек был как то оправдан.
А так... по крайней мере выглядит не корректно

да шучу я, милый! а вообще, серьёзно, отрой ММ, там все существа есть.

[Skay]

#31 Remorhaz (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 137
Commander:
Alignment: CG/CE
AC: 20
Level: 12
Speed: 6
HP: 165
Melee: +22/+19(25 magic+Swallow Whole/20magic)
Ranged:
Type: Huge Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 3
Swallow Whole: (Destroy Medium or smaller creature; DC 20)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
[] []Immolating Carapace: Replaces attack action: Each adjacent enemy takes 20 fire damage and 20 cold damage, DC 23 ).

A thousand legs of cold- and fire-fueled fury.

#32 Rimefire Griffon
Size: Large
Pts: 63
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 19
Level: 9
Speed: F8
HP: 75
Melee: +15/+13 (10 magic+ 5cold damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Pounce (This creature can use all its melee attacks when charging.)
Bloodlust
[] [] Rimefire Blast: (Replaces attacks: cone; 5 fire damage OR 15 cold damage; DC 18)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
Flyby: Replaces attack : Move up to its speed (minimum 1 square) and make 1 melee attack or Rimefire Blast attack at any time during that move.

#33 Salamander Firetail
Size: Large
Pts: 69
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 20
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 115
Melee: +19/+14 (10 + 10 fire damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Fire
Cleave
Double Damage from Cold
DR 5
[] Quadro Attack: Make 4 basic attacks.
[] [] Whipping Tail: (Replaces attacks: line 12; 25 fire damage; DC 18)

SPELLS
4th Level
swift fireburst (swift; each adjacent creature; 15 fire damage, can cast while adjacent to enemy; DC 18)

With a lash of its tail, the entire battlefield erupted in flames.

# 34 Scarecrow Stalker
Size: medium
Pts: 17
Commander:
Alignment: CG/CE
AC: 15
Level: 6
Speed: 6
HP: 40
Melee: +9 (10 damage)
Ranged:+11 (10 damage+sleep poison)
Type: Construst, Fey
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Sleep Poison (Sleep; DC 16)
Double Damage from Fire
Stalker: +2 Attack and +5 Damage against targets with no other adjacent enemies or allies.
Restuff: Replaces move: This creature heals 5 HP.

Come. It is time to keep your appointment with the straw men.

#35 Sivak Draconian

Size: Large
Pts: 28
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 18
Level: 8
Speed: F8
HP: 55
Melee: +15/+10 (15 magic/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid − Dragon − Reptilian
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Melee Reach 2
Breath Weapon [] [] (Replaces attacks: cone; 10 damage; DC 15, Hit or miss, push each target up to 2 squares.)
Breath Weapon [] (Replaces attacks: line 12; 15 electricity damage; DC 15)
Resist 5 Cold
Death Shape: When this creature is destroyed by an enemy, that enemy is Stunned(DC 18).

Born of corrupted silver dragon eggs, the sivak are the largest and most martial of the draconians.

# 36 Slaad Spawn

Size: small
Pts: 12
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 15
Level: 5
Speed: 5
HP: 35
Melee: +7/+7 (5 magic/5 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Small Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Immune Sonic
Death Burst (5 damage; DC 16)
[] [](Replaces attacks: Chaotic Slam: Move up to 6 squares as though with Flight, then make 1 attack, 10 damage AND Stunned. On miss, this creature -10 hp.)
Chaotic Fly (+3 move, if you lost initiative.)

Death Burst: When this creature is destroyed, each adjacent enemy and ally takes 5 damage.
Hit or miss, it’s bad news.

# 37 Storm Titan (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 172
Alignment: CG
AC: 25
Level: 19
Speed: F8
HP: 185
Melee: +22/+17 (10 + 15 Electricity/ 20 magic)
Ranged: +12/+8 (25)

Type: Huge Giant
Special Abilities:
Immune Electricity
Melee Reach 3
Save =10
Flight
Aggressive (Melee damage +10 against Medium or smaller enemies, attacks while not wounded)
Storm Fury: +4 AC against ranged attacks.

Spells:
3rd Level
lightning bolt [][][] (line 12; 20 electricity damage, DC 18)
5th Level
empowered lightning bolt [][] (line 12; 30 electricity damage; DC 22)

#38 Talon Slaad

Size: Large
Pts: 54
Alignment: CE
AC: 21
Level: 8
Speed: 6
HP: 75
Melee: +13/+11 (20 magic / 15)
Ranged:

Type: Large Outsider
Special Abilities:
Immune Sonic
Melee Reach 2
[] (Replaces attacks: Ravager’s Fury: (cone; 25 damage. DC 16)
Chaos Storm: Use after rolling initiative: If your roll was a natural 11-15, this creature recharges Ravager’s Fury and each enemy has –2 AC until end of round.

Elemental Chaos personified.

#39 War Troll
COMMANDER 3

Size: Large
Pts: 69
Alignment: CE/LE
AC: 23
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 85
Melee: +16/+14 (20 / 15)
Ranged: +10 ( 15)

Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid - Large Giant
Commander Effect: Troll followers gain melee damage +5 against wounded creatures.

Special Abilities:
Feral Regeneration 10 (Immediate: This creature heals 10 hp)
Melee Reach 2
Crippling Slash: Use when this creature hits a living enemy with a attack: If the attack roll was a natural 17-20, target is also Slowed and takes 10 damage (DC19).
Rend +15 (if this creature hits a one enemy with two melee attacks on the same turn, damage +15 to second attack)

“Trust a wizard to breed a better troll.” —Lidda, halfling rogue

#40 Yochlol Tempter

Size: Medium
Pts: 63
Alignment: CE
AC: 22
Level: 12
Speed: 7
HP: 85
Melee: +17/+17 (10 / 10)
Ranged: +12/+8 (10 magic+web/10)
Type: Outsider − Demon

Commander Effect: Drow and demon followers has +2 attack and +5 Damage.

Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Electricity, Poison
Spell Resistance
DR 5
[](Replaces attacks: Amorphous Flurry: Make up to 4 attacks; if 2 or more hit the same target, that target also has –4 to AC and – 4 save).
Web (Entangle; radius 2; DC 16)
Wall Walker. ( This creature is considered to have Flight as long as it begins its move in a square bordered by a wall)

[Tien]

Rimefire Blast: (Replaces attacks: cone; 5 fire damage OR 15 cold damage; DC 18)
Может 15 fire?

Slaad Spawn
2 атаки по +7 слишком много для 12 очков. предлагаю уменьшить модификатор 2ой атаки или вообще убрать.
Все слаады CE, потому и слаада спауна надо тоже сделать CE.

Storm Titan (Epic)
Рэндж атака является лишней, поскольку молнии что он метает, есть его спеллы!

Yochlol Tempter
2 атаки по +17 слишком много: предлагаю немного уменьшить модификатор 2ой атаки.

У троля:
Feral Regeneration 10 (Immediate: This creature heals 10 hp)
Немного некорректный текст, относительно правил 1.0 редакции.
К тому же в 2.0 у этой способности был только 1 чекбокс использования.

И все таки у саламандры слишком много жизней, тем более если учитывать Quadro Attack, то он слишком силен для своих 69 очков.

Вот вроде все замечания.

[Darksider]

#39 War Troll
COMMANDER 3

Size: Large
Pts: 69
Alignment: CE/LE
AC: 23
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 85
Melee: +16/+14 (20 / 15)
Ranged: +10 ( 15)

Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid - Large Giant
Commander Effect: Troll followers gain melee damage +5 against wounded creatures.

Special Abilities:
Feral Regeneration 10 (Immediate: This creature heals 10 hp)
Melee Reach 2
Crippling Slash: Use when this creature hits a living enemy with a attack: If the attack roll was a natural 17-20, target is also Slowed and takes 10 damage (DC19).
Rend +15 (if this creature hits a one enemy with two melee attacks on the same turn, damage +15 to second attack)

”Trust a wizard to breed a better troll.” —Lidda, halfling rogue

Вообще-то карточка к War Troll'у существует с момента выхода War Drums. Его оттуда уже переводили в 2.0. Чего мудрите-то?

[Skay]

Тебе нужна вторая одинаковая карточка? Мне нет

[Blackmort]

Тогда хоть назовите как-нибудь по-иначе! Имя дайте или профессию подпишите. А то хер поймешь где какие троли...

[Skay]

Вот критика, по моим кричам от американцев

#31 Remorhaz (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 137
Commander:
Alignment: CG/CE
AC: 20
Level: 12
Speed: 6
HP: 165
Melee: +22/+19(25 magic+Swallow Whole/20magic)
Ranged:
Type: Huge Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 3
Swallow Whole: (Destroy Medium or smaller creature; DC 20)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
[] []Immolating Carapace: Replaces attack action: Each adjacent enemy takes 20 fire damage and 20 cold damage, DC 23 ).

A thousand legs of cold- and fire-fueled fury.

#32 Rimefire Griffon
Size: Large
Pts: 63
Commander:
Alignment: CG
AC: 19
Level: 9
Speed: F8
HP: 75
Melee: +15/+13 (10 magic+ 5cold damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Magical Beast
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Pounce (This creature can use all its melee attacks when charging.)
Bloodlust
[] [] Rimefire Blast: (Replaces attacks: cone; 5 fire damage OR 15 cold damage; DC 18)
Resist 10 Cold, Fire
Flyby: Replaces attack : Move up to its speed (minimum 1 square) and make 1 melee attack or Rimefire Blast attack at any time during that move.

#33 Salamander Firetail
Size: Large
Pts: 69
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 20
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 115
Melee: +19/+14 (10 + 10 fire damage/10 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Large Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Fire
Cleave
Double Damage from Cold
DR 5
[] Quadro Attack: Make 4 basic attacks. *NOT SO SURE ABOUT THE NAME – MAYBE “FRENZIED ATTACK* - ALSO “BASIC ATTACK” IS 2.0 TERMINOLOGY – HOW ABOUT “MELEE ATTACKS”
[] [] Whipping Tail: (Replaces attacks: line 12; 25 fire damage; DC 18) *NICE IDEA, BUT I WONDER IF A CONE WOULDN’T BE MORE IN LINE WITH A WHIPPING TAIL?*

SPELLS
4th Level
swift fireburst (swift; each adjacent creature; 15 fire damage, can cast while adjacent to enemy; DC 18)

With a lash of its tail, the entire battlefield erupted in flames.

# 34 Scarecrow Stalker
Size: medium
Pts: 17
Commander:
Alignment: CG/CE
AC: 15
Level: 6
Speed: 6
HP: 40
Melee: +9 (10 damage)
Ranged:+11 (10 damage+sleep poison)
Type: Construst, Fey *CONSTRUCT – SPELLIING*
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Sleep Poison (Sleep; DC 16)
Double Damage from Fire
Stalker: +2 Attack and +5 Damage against targets with no other adjacent enemies or allies.
Restuff: Replaces move: This creature heals 5 HP. *HEALS, SHOULD PROBABLY BE “REPAIRS”*

Come. It is time to keep your appointment with the straw men.

#35 Sivak Draconian

Size: Large
Pts: 28 *THE PIECE IS A LITTLE TOO POWERFUL FOR 28PTS – I’VE MADE SOME SUGGESTIONS*
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 18
Level: 8 *PROBABLY LEVEL 6*
Speed: F8
HP: 55
Melee: +15/+10 (15 magic/10 magic) *PROBABLY +12/+7 (10 magic/10)*
Ranged:
Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid − Dragon − Reptilian
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Flight
Melee Reach 2
Breath Weapon [] [] (Replaces attacks: cone; 10 damage; DC 15, Hit or miss, push each target up to 2 squares.) *I THINK THIS CAN BE A TAIL SWEEP ALSO, NOT A BREATH WEAPON, JUST DESCRIBED AS A CONE*
Breath Weapon [] (Replaces attacks: line 12; 15 electricity damage; DC 15)
Resist 5 Cold
Death Shape: When this creature is destroyed by an enemy, that enemy is Stunned(DC 18).

Born of corrupted silver dragon eggs, the sivak are the largest and most martial of the draconians.

# 36 Slaad Spawn

Size: small
Pts: 12
Commander:
Alignment: LE
AC: 15
Level: 5
Speed: 5
HP: 35
Melee: +7/+7 (5 magic/5 magic)
Ranged:
Type: Small Outsider
Commander Effect:
Special Abilities:
Immune Sonic
Death Burst (5 damage; DC 16)
[] [](Replaces attacks: Chaotic Slam: Move up to 6 squares as though with Flight, then make 1 attack, 10 damage AND Stunned. On miss, this creature -10 hp.) *SLAM IS A 2.0 TERM – MAYBE “CHAOTIC FLIGHT ATTACK”*
Chaotic Fly (+3 move, if you lost initiative *THIS ROUND*.)

Death Burst: When this creature is destroyed, each adjacent enemy and ally takes 5 damage. *ANY DC?*
Hit or miss, it’s bad news.

# 37 Storm Titan (Epic)

Size: Huge
Pts: 172
Alignment: CG
AC: 25
Level: 19
Speed: F8
HP: 185
Melee: +22/+17 (10 + 15 Electricity/ 20 magic)
Ranged: +12/+8 (25)

Type: Huge Giant
Special Abilities:
Immune Electricity
Melee Reach 3
Save =10
Flight
Aggressive (Melee damage +10 against Medium or smaller enemies, attacks while not wounded)
Storm Fury: +4 AC against ranged attacks.

Spells:
3rd Level
lightning bolt [][][] (line 12; 20 electricity damage, DC 18)
5th Level
empowered lightning bolt [][] (line 12; 30 electricity damage; DC 22)
*HOW ABOUT USING EITHER CHAIN LIGHTNING OR LIGHTNING ARC INSTEAD – INTRODUCE A NEW SPELL?*
* Chain Lightning sight; radius 4; 40 electrical; DC18 *

#38 Talon Slaad

Size: Large
Pts: 54
Alignment: CE
AC: 21
Level: 8
Speed: 6
HP: 75
Melee: +13/+11 (20 magic / 15)
Ranged:

Type: Large Outsider
Special Abilities:
Immune Sonic
Melee Reach 2
[] (Replaces attacks: Ravager’s Fury: (cone; 25 damage. DC 16)
Chaos Storm: Use after rolling initiative: If your roll was a natural 11-15, this creature recharges Ravager’s Fury and each enemy has –2 AC until end of round. *THIS COULD ANNOY 1.0 PLAYERS - SEEMS TOO MUCH LIKE 2.0*

Elemental Chaos personified.

#39 War Troll
COMMANDER 3

Size: Large
Pts: 69
Alignment: CE/LE
AC: 23
Level: 11
Speed: 6
HP: 85
Melee: +16/+14 (20 / 15)
Ranged: +10 ( 15)

Type: Large Monstrous Humanoid - Large Giant
Commander Effect: Troll followers gain melee damage +5 against wounded creatures.

Special Abilities:
Feral Regeneration 10 (Immediate: This creature heals 10 hp) *HOW OFTEN?*
Melee Reach 2
Crippling Slash: Use when this creature hits a living enemy with a attack: If the attack roll was a natural 17-20, target is also Slowed and takes 10 damage (DC19). *10 DMG ONGOING?* *HOW LONG IS IT SLOWED?*
Rend +15 (if this creature hits a one enemy with two melee attacks on the same turn, damage +15 to second attack)

“Trust a wizard to breed a better troll.” —Lidda, halfling rogue

#40 Yochlol Tempter

Size: Medium
Pts: 63
Alignment: CE
AC: 22
Level: 12
Speed: 7
HP: 85
Melee: +17/+17 (10 / 10)
Ranged: +12/+8 (10 magic+web/10)
Type: Outsider − Demon

Commander Effect: Drow and demon followers has +2 attack and +5 Damage.

Special Abilities:
Melee Reach 2
Immune Electricity, Poison
Spell Resistance
DR 5
[](Replaces attacks: Amorphous Flurry: Make up to 4 attacks; if 2 or more hit the same target, that target also has –4 to AC and – 4 save) *SAVE? HOW LONG?*.
Web (Entangle; radius 2; DC 16) *RANGE?*
Wall Walker. ( This creature is considered to have Flight as long as it begins its move in a square bordered by a wall)

[Darksider]

По-моему всё равно слишком уж убертвари вышли. Достаточно сравнить с существами той же стоимости.